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I have written a short poem about my faith

My faith is like a fragile flower
In a void a sulphur Oblivion
I won't like an Atheist cower
Because my faith weighs a tonne
SW-User
I’m a believer too but why would you associate your faith with fragility?
Richard65 · M
Atheists don't cower. That's the entire point. Plus, in line one your faith is a fragile flower, but in the last line you describe it as weighing a tonne, which is contradictory.
IndigoSavage · 22-25, F
@Richard65 it is known as poetic licence actually
Richard65 · M
@IndigoSavage fair enough
Raaii · 22-25, F
really funny

 
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