Winter Heart Song

Come
lay with me
in the bough
of an evergreen
Layer
some fine wild feathers
for our comfy bed
Birdsong
to inspire our slumber
Wind
to tuck us in deeper
All this nature
surrounds us
All this beauty
seen in our eyes
Our hearts together
Beat beat beat in time
Surely we shall
wake to a brand new day
In the forest
In our home
Together
Once more.

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RobinPhoenix · M

I read your inspirational lines while sitting in front of a fan :P ;)

No, seriously. Your poem is beautiful and I love how your words create images in my mind.... of the intimacy between two people who have not yet lost their connection to the mother of all life: nature :) 💚

PoetryNEmotion · F

@RobinPhoenix Another brat reply only from another corner of the world! I am laughing!

Thank you for your deep words. Now I am smiling.

RobinPhoenix · M

@PoetryNEmotion Hahaha... two souls one thought ;) ;) discovered the other cheeky comment only by your hint ;)

Happy to know I could make you laugh and smile :)

Shutterbug · 56-60, M

Reads while cranking up the air conditioner …..

PoetryNEmotion · F

@Shutterbug You are such a brat! Thanks for your comment. I wish people would comment. It inspires me to spin more poetry. Have a good night judging by your time zone and mine.

Quimliqer · 70-79, M

Very nice!!

PoetryNEmotion · F

@Quimliqer Thank you, Quim.

PoeticPlay · 51-55, M

PoetryNEmotion · F

@PoeticPlay You would have to explain using words what you mean. It is unclear about a black panther.

PoeticPlay · 51-55, M

@PoetryNEmotion
I was reading that from the persective of a cat watching a bird.

PoetryNEmotion · F

@PoeticPlay I suppose you are entitled to your own interpretation. This is meant to be romantic.

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