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This may be my best song yet ...

This song I completely stole the intro idea from a really popular band and popular song.
See if you can figure out which one it was.

PoetryNEmotion actually wrote the poem I used in this from an idea I had.
I think this may be the best one I have done yet.
I had this idea that the first ten songs you write are going to be garbage.
So I made a bunch of two minute songs and did some lead overs for VirginMatchMaker.
They aren't horrid but they all lack stuff.
I am learning a lot more about multi-track recording on the computer and I think that is best on this one as well.
So if you would do me a solid and give my creation a listen I would welcome any criticism you may have to offer.
Also, I want to see if anyone knows what song I ripped off my intro from.
Thank you in advance.
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Jackaloftheazuresand · 26-30, M
I don't really have an ear for instrumentals so that aspect sounds generic to me but I only have one real correction. When the instructional video first comes on it obscures the lyrics. Other than that I think the tweaking you need to do is simple stuff I'm sure you're aware of like trying to use too many words to say something in an amount of time.
Dainbramadge · 56-60, M
@Jackaloftheazuresand Thanks for the input. :-)