looping · 22-25			
		
		Amir i suppose. it could be interesting to know more about the inner turmoil the character goes through whilst turning into a demon. it could lead to some awesome character development if done correctly.
			
			
			
			
			
		
			DDonde · 31-35, M			
		
		Amir sounds like a more interesting character because there's a conflict within his character.
			
			
			
			
			
		
			
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