My new poetry

Hi this is my first youtube poem. I will be happy if you take look and write me a feedback. It will help me be better.
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cinsac

This is the last entry in my poem book.

CREEPING

Time is a thief that never gets caught
Creeping around to take what you've got
Age is his partner, they work hand in hand
If time is on your side you need age to understand
Once you understand, you wish you had more time
Because seeing age and getting old is a crime
You pay with your life, wisdom comes with a price
All to know that time is precious and age ain't nice

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cinsac

It's nice. Keep writing...

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