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Your touch is my fire
Under the command
Of my hands
You submit to your desires
The drum beats faster
Love turns to lust
The rhythms slow
And the lust returns to love
As it must
Just a fingertip caressing
Your touch is my fire
Under the command
Of my hands
You submit to your desires
The drum beats faster
Love turns to lust
The rhythms slow
And the lust returns to love
As it must
Just a fingertip caressing