Trying to make a sci-fi story

Any ideas can help develop my main story?
It's a about device that makes time rifts and teleportation for a specific area, it's been distributed to certain people to use for a certain cause, a war is coming perhaps!
So what do you think guys?

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MikefromEP · 51-55, M

Teleport to the future or the past?

KaiKaga · 26-30, M

@MikefromEP: i avoided to use time travel and creating endless timelines with thousands of possibilities, what i trying to do, is a device created by certain scientists after a trip to space to find a new planet but it ended with a failure, the plot reveals otherwise later, that the met an entity, they gained some superintellectual, intelligent power to make such device.
The story tells who uses these device in the dark city ruled by criminals.

MikefromEP · 51-55, M

@KaiKaga: To teleport in space you need 7 points of reference on where to travel too...So basically the one that teleports has vast knowledge already