Trying to make a sci-fi story

Any ideas can help develop my main story?
It's a about device that makes time rifts and teleportation for a specific area, it's been distributed to certain people to use for a certain cause, a war is coming perhaps!
So what do you think guys?

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Jackaloftheazuresand · 26-30, M

Do something different

KaiKaga · 26-30, M

@Jackaloftheazuresand: i know it sounds like super lame and cliche, but it is good, i made a lot of progess in it, character are amazing so far, I've told bunch a people about it and they liked it.
I am just too damn lazy to write the whole plot, or scared to be stolen lol

Jackaloftheazuresand · 26-30, M

If you have such confidence in it then go on

KaiKaga · 26-30, M

I do
Thanks 👍😄