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The first book I've ever released upon the public is pretty dumb

It's a dumbass story about some protagonist. I guess she has a personality that contradicts her personal career. I know, it sounds lame. But, I guess it's worth trying to convince why you should purchase such a story. *sigh* I guess this is a summary-

Are you seeking a rich fantasy world? One with a story that doesn't force the lore upon you, instead, allowing you to explore the world as the story grows. What about a female protagonist? A young lass with strong magical abilities. However, her power doesn't fully describe her character. In fact, she absolutely hates the direction her powers have forced her towards. What she truly desires, to become a singer.

I know, I know, the story sounds boring as hell.
PowerofStories · 61-69, M
You need a good agent. How about this:

"This book will transport you into a fantasy would of unparalleled richness. In it, a simple lass, who aspires to the modest goal of becoming a singer, is torn away from her humble desires by her strong magical powers that overwhelm her. You will be transfixed by this tale which shows, like no other, the life and death struggle for the soul that ensues when an ordinary girl is blessed (or cursed) with extraordinary abilities."
SW-User
@PowerofStories Very nice.
QueenofVenus · 36-40, F
Don't be discouraged, nobody writes gold the first time. Keep at it. Writing begets writing and good luck to you
SW-User
It might sound better if you describe the story without adding the self doubt in the description.

 
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