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I Write Poetry

Brave

When one falls, one must land eventually.
It's an ancient law after all.
The reason many are afraid to fall in love, most definitely.
Well, now, be brave.
Not because all will be well, it most certainly won't,
But because at times, it will be grand.
Grand is swell, grand means magnificent,
Grand is awe-inspiring and grand is splendid.
Things that a grand are often better than the rest.
A grand piano's immaculate tone appropriate for a piano concerto.
A grand entrance hall luxurious with premium finishing,
And high ceiling closer to the sky.
So if falling in love will be that spectacular,
Why not take the chance?


(plz comment.I was thinking maybe I need to change it and stop with the grand thing)
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SagePoet · 61-69, M
Many references to "grand" too many, maybe. Try and find other words that say the same thing, that also can maybe fit (just a suggestion) but I like what you are trying to say. I hear you.
Pureblossom · 22-25, F
@feathers: Thanks 😘