Mountain Laurel Her hair was made of fire And her eyes were mountain green Her smile my soul's...

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Her hair was made of fire And her eyes were mountain green Her smile my soul's desire The loveliest lass I'd seen But her heart was black as coal Deep beneath the mountain's brow Darker than the depths untold Colder than the mountain ground I have...

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ACRYLICART · 56-60, M

I think you have a lot more talent than what you give yourself credit for.

TweekeeKeekee · 26-30, F

@ACRYLICART thank you I appreciate that. I just try to get better and let the work speak for itself. I have no idea if I have talent or not lol but I like how trying to write poetry focuses my mind

ACRYLICART · 56-60, M

Lord Byron would like it, for sure.

TweekeeKeekee · 26-30, F

@ACRYLICART Thank you! I was gonna say she was definitely a belle dame sans merci, but then I remembered that's Keats not Byron lol. But definitely high praise and I really appreciate it :)