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I found my old notes…. To the man I lost to addiction ..

It’s raining!!

Looking at the end of the lonely road, you have condemned your image in the mirror to death ....

You whispered the tragic song of grief in the ears of the mountains ….

What curse made you forget the legend of the Sun??

And now the mountains, whose destiny was not to cry, are shedding tears over the hero of no epic ...

ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Beautifully written poetry ❤️
@ChampagneOnIce

Thank you my sweet friend… 🤗🌹🌹

I’m glad that you liked it..
RodionRomanovitch · 56-60, M
It's almost an inexplicable grief to lose a loved one to addiction , but somehow you managed it.
@RodionRomanovitch

Thank you… 🙏🙏
alan20 · M
Nice to hear your whisperings again Soosie. Take care my friend.❤️
@alan20

Hi dear Alan… thank you my friend… glad to see you again… 🤗🤗
alan20 · M
@Soossie 🤗🤗
Oh my….you’re such an exemplary poetess, Sis. Loved this…✨🌸❤️
@Vivaci

Thank you my lovely sister… I try… lol

🤗🤗🌹🥰❤️
pearllederman · 61-69, F
you seem good at writing poems
@pearllederman

Thank you sweetness… 🥰🌹🤗❤️
Magenta · F
This is pure poetic art. Top notch! 💕
@Magenta

Aww!! Thank you sweet lady… very kind of you to say so… 🌹🤗❤️
Abstraction · 61-69, M
Oh. Words are like these tiny black holes in the page we pour our thoughts and feelings into but sometimes just a few can hide an ocean of grief below the paper.
@Abstraction

Thank you gentle Abstraction… for reading this and for your words… 🙏🙏🤗
Montanaman · M
This is epic! 👍❤️❤️
Now we get to know the poetic Soossie! 😎✍️🌹
@Montanaman

Thank you … you’re very kind… had to make couple of changes…. 🤗🤗
carpediem · 61-69, M
Beautiful yet sad
@carpediem

Sad, indeed… thank you for reading it…

🤗🤗
I hate the rain... it 400% to 600% above normal in my area. So in my opinion fk the rain
@Darksideinthenight2

Ok… but this is a funny comment on a serious post.. 😂😂
@Soossie u welcome! i could bring down the seriousness ;) 🤣🤣

 
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