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CrazyMusicLover · 31-35
If that's true then I hope you'll never have a daughter.
Stephie · 22-25, F
The start of that poem was nice until you basically stated that girls were not worth anything.
Antoine85 · 36-40, M
@Stephie whilst we're on the subject may I add that the offence for which I missed my son's birth had already been committed before I met my son's mum and she fell pregnant. It's not like I knew and was a dick anyway. Don't make any difference I guess but had it been a daughter as I said I'd probably have guys having a go at me because id of worded in that context x
Pfuzylogic · M
It is so difficult to connect to the family inside. Your tribute to your son keeps him close to the heart. Easy to tell your heart was in this work!
Antoine85 · 36-40, M
@Pfuzylogic thank u logic. As I can c it's been taken out of context part of it but yes I was saddened to miss his birth. I met his mum whilst I had a pending court charge and by the time the birth came round I was doing 6 months but he's my inspiration
Lilymoon · F
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SledgeHammer · 46-50, M
Cool poem --
How much time did you do?
How much time did you do?
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Antoine85 · 36-40, M
I apologise for any offense. Maybe poor word choice. If it had been a girl then I'd of likely offended men by my word choice. Hey listen I'm no expert in literature or poetry so I do apologise for the line but it has been taken way out of context from what I meant x
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