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As One Listens to the Rain…

A poem by Octavio Paz:

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Listen to me as one listens to the rain,
not attentive, not distracted,
light footsteps, thin drizzle,
water that is air, air that is time,
the day is still leaving,
the night has yet to arrive,
figurations of mist
at the turn of the corner,
figurations of time
at the bend in this pause,
listen to me as one listens to the rain,
without listening, hear what I say
with eyes open inward, asleep
with all five senses awake,
it's raining, light footsteps, a murmur of syllables,
air and water, words with no weight:
what we are and are,
the days and years, this moment,
weightless time and heavy sorrow,
listen to me as one listens to the rain,
wet asphalt is shining,
steam rises and walks away,
night unfolds and looks at me,
you are you and your body of steam,
you and your face of night,
you and your hair, unhurried lightning,
you cross the street and enter my forehead,
footsteps of water across my eyes,
listen to me as one listens to the rain
elafina · 36-40, F
thank you
beautiful
I read it in a whispering voice and I noticed how
the choice of words literally sounded like a light rain
❤️
elafina · 36-40, F
@Soossie there's beauty in the silence of those hours.. drink some warm water maybe.. 🤗
@elafina

Thank you … Warm water sounds good …
elafina · 36-40, F
@Soossie yes.. I do that when it's too late for a tea but I want the comfort of the warm steam 🌹
pearllederman · 61-69, F
thats a good poem, i like rain , it keeps the guy on oxygen from smoking
@pearllederman

Lol … then I like it too ..

🤗🌹🥰❤️
JustNik · 51-55, F
Ooohhhhh that’s a beauty. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
@JustNik

It is indeed … I was hoping that you’d like it … glad that you did .. 🤗🌹❤️

 
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