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Luxure d'août

Her eyes and that gorgeous smile,
Are two of the fondest memories I have of her.
She danced a dance so footloose and fancy,
But she didn't just throw caution to the wind.
For she was a majestic lady,
A harmonious balance of careful and carefree,
Good and Naughty.
With a spirit so beautiful,
It touched the hearts of many.
But in all of her splendor,
Only a few could tell the tale of her love.
Because she was one in a million,
And she never settled for anything less.

Sapio
i wish i could use that but that would be just wrong,,,,but that was awesome...
@Sapio Thank you so very much :) I wish I could write, it's the first line of a SciFi story I wanted to write years ago, but I got bad writer's block quickly into it.
Sapio · 51-55, M
@NativePortlander1970 the urge to write comes and goes. I'll admit that before the poem written above. I had writer's block and didn't write for months. If there is any advice I can give you. It's think of yourself like you're watching a movie when you write. Write the scene as if someone is watching.
@Sapio That's a good way to do it as I was watching Becoming Jane with my late ex fiancee when I wrote that line.
Beautyinbroken · 36-40, F
Love it 💛🌻my favorite line "only a few could tell the tale of her love "
Sapio · 51-55, M
@Beautyinbroken thank you.
Sparklesatnite · 51-55, F
very beautiful and well written .
Sapio · 51-55, M
@Sparklesatnite thank you.
Sapio · 51-55, M
@Bexsy thank you.
@Sapio you're welcome
FlutteringWordsX · 41-45, F
Beautifully written
Sapio · 51-55, M
@FlutteringWordsX thank you.
Aysel · F
Sapio · 51-55, M
@Aysel thank you.
Sapio · 51-55, M
@NoGamesTolerated thank you.
JustNik · 51-55, F
Lovely 💕
Sapio · 51-55, M
@JustNik thank you.

 
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