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I write sad poetry..The Trip

My sister took a trip today,
somewhere so far away.
She needed not her shoes or keys,
or clothes for every day.

My sister took a trip today,
knew not the date or time.
Or if she could convey somehow
to say that she was fine.

My sister took a trip today,
though not by land or sea.
And I could see the pain she felt,
as she waited patiently.

My sister took a trip today,
I could not help but cry.
I held her hand and hugged her tight,
and then I said goodbye.

Elaines trip was now at hand,
I knew she had to go.
Then Angels came and gave her wings,
and her new Halo.
PinkMoon · 26-30, F
This is beautiful.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@PinkMoon thank you so much.
Dave1955 · 61-69, M
I'm sorry for your loss.

Poetry has a way of saying something a few words that speaks volumes.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Dave1955 thank you. Yes I find it does.
Umile · 41-45, F
Sad but beautiful.

My condolences for your loss.

🙏
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@Umile thank you.
Umile · 41-45, F
@melissa001 You're welcome. 🤗
teachmetiger210503 · 36-40, M
A bitter goodbye but I hope she embraced it bravely.
samueltyler2 · 80-89, M
Sad, but beautiful.
melissa001 · 51-55, F
@samueltyler2 thank you so much.

 
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