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I Write Dark Poetry

Formless Fears...  [youtube=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckB3AAZ3_gs]


From out of blackest pits of hell
There comes a form you know too well
Upon your thoughts it feeds and dwells
And fed by fear its stature swells
 
You try to block it from your mind
But something in you undefined
Feels apathetically resigned
To give it what it’s come to find
 
And so you wait within the night
Your building fear a beacon light
For this unholy formless blight
Whose birth and purpose is your fright
 
Your mind is numb destroyed by fear
This evil creature’s growing near
Your heart is racing most severe
And silently you shed a tear
 
Your mouth has gone completely dry
Your ears pick out the demon’s sigh
You tightly close your teary eyes
And wonder if tonight you’ll die
 
It feels like hours as you wait
But by and by your fears abate
Your mind is once again sedate
It seems tonight was not your fate
 
Gently into dreams you’re sent
Not caring where the creature went
Dreamily you’re quite content
That over is the night’s torment
 
But the fear you felt was just abated
When it’s hunger was satiated
And when that hunger’s reinflated
Another visit then is fated
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Pretty!!! I'm happy it had the desired effect ;-) *muwhahaha*

Thanks, Dejin!!! I'm not sure how long...prolly just over an hour...two hours at the outside. Anything that takes me longer than that usually frustrates me to the point that it almost never gets finished.
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
LMAO!!! Ya know, when I posted this without a video, you were the first person I thought of!!! :-D
I may have to do one for it, but I'm still thinking over some changes first.

Glad you liked it! (even if you did have to actually read it) ;-) LOL
whisperingsunshine
I found it yay! And yes omg the audio was the perfect touch. Dayum dude, u gots one helluva imagination and a perfect frikken voice for it. Now to make this viral too! U create some serious chills dude
sugarfooties
This is the first post of yours I've read, and all I can say is WOW! This poem conveys to me very much the same feeling of inevitable horror that a lot of Edgar Allen Poe's work does. Good job! I look forward to reading more.
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
I actually like writing dark stuff like this too...but this one in particular I'm not really in love with. I think it needs a bit of a rewrite for a better flow and a better ending ;-) lol
whisperingsunshine
awe.. ya thought of me eh? cuz ya knew i'd whine about it. wahell, e'ryone else wants ta see the vid toos! Your vids kick creepy poem azz!
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Pinky! :-)
I told Whisp over a week ago I'd add the audio for it, and finally found a roundtoit to get it done with ;-) lol
whisperingsunshine
first i checked for the vid.. urg! no vid wth?!!... ok ok I guess i'll scroll back up and reeeeeead it now.
PrettyOldSoul
Radd ass Ford... The ear picks out the devils sigh.......ooooohhhh.....this poem makes me shivver.....poe vincent pricey..:)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Awwww, Thank you, Whisp!!! :-)
Yeah, starting to think I should actively pursue as career using my voice
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, sugarfooties!!! I'm honored to be compared to such a master wordsmith as Poe :):):)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Queen!!! I'm glad you like it so very much :):):):):) *cuddles up next to you*
whisperingsunshine
dude! that was awesome. I totally read it with your voice in mind.. creeeeeeepy!
dejin1
great work im impressed far outbeats my poems a hundred fold how long did it take you
RickiChickie
I saw your poem vid on youtube this morning. Kudos to you FordPrefect!
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
OK my sunny funny friend, a video it is then ;-) (soonish)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Queen!!! You always say the most wonderful things :-)
phillyphan78
Ford, that is just totally freekin awesome !! I loved it :)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Quercus!!! I'm glad to hear that :-)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, ricki!!! I'm glad ya liked it! :-)
emmylou82
Fantastic loved it :-)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Glad you liked it, Emmylou :-)
emmylou82
You really are a great writer. I would be at the front of the queue buying your book x :-)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, my good ostrich friend :-)
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Pinky :-)
(((((hugs)))))
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thank you, Michelle :-)
tl4392
Hey nice one!
Zaphod42 · 46-50, M
Thanks, TL :-)

 
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