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The Silver Visitor

You arrive without knocking,
a pale face at my window,
wearing silence like a cloak.
Some nights you linger—
silver and steady,
a confidant who listens
to every restless thought I spill.

Other nights you vanish,
leaving me alone with shadows,
as if absence itself were
a lesson you’re determined to teach.

I’ve tried to follow you,
to map your moods in calendars,
but you are never the same—
waxing, waning,
slipping between fullness and retreat,
like someone undecided about love.

Yet always, always, you return.
Even in your smallest sliver
you remind me:
goodbyes are only half-truths,
and some companions
were born to drift,
but never truly leave.
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moonlightlullaby · 46-50, F
How truly lovely! And of course, I identity with your feelings. The first and last stanza really hit the heart.

You're also very good at free verse poetry and I hope to read more.

Spectra · 26-30, F
@moonlightlullaby Aww thank you! Your username fits haha but I’ll look forward to sharing more then 💕
moonlightlullaby · 46-50, F
@Spectra You're so welcome 🩵✨
I like this very much ☺
Spectra · 26-30, F
@Telcontar Thanks, glad you like it!
JackDaniels · 46-50, M
Very nice. You write very well..
Spectra · 26-30, F
@JackDaniels Thank you!!
mayguy · 51-55, M
Ahhh... La Luna. 🌝 She knows so much yet reveals so little.
Spectra · 26-30, F
@mayguy Oh yes but that’s part of her appeal 🌗
lovingdead · 36-40, M
Wonderful, to often do the stars overshadow the moon and its beauty

 
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