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[poem] "Leaving is not enough" Frida Kahlo to Marty McConnell by Marty McConnell





Leaving is not enough; you must

stay gone. train your heart

like a dog. change the locks

even on the house he’s never

visited. you lucky, lucky girl.

you have an apartment

just your size. a bathtub

full of tea. a heart the size

of Arizona, but not nearly

so arid. don’t wish away

your cracked past, your

crooked toes, your problems

are papier mache puppets

you made or bought because the vendor

at the market was so compelling you just

had to have them. you had to have him.

and you did. and now you pull down

the bridge between your houses,

you make him call before

he visits, you take a lover

for granted, you take

a lover who looks at you

like maybe you are magic. make

the first bottle you consume

in this place a relic. place it

on whatever altar you fashion

with a knife and five cranberries.

don’t lose too much weight.

stupid girls are always trying to

disappear as revenge. and you

are not stupid. you loved a man

with more hands than a parade

of beggars, and here you stand. heart

like a four-poster bed. heart like a canvas.

heart leaking something so strong

they can smell it in the street.
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Not a poem, but a song. "I can't make you love me" by Bonnie Raitt. In particular, the lines:

Here in the dark in these final hours, I will lay down my heart and I'll feel the power
But you won't, no you won't,
'Cause I can't make you love me, if you don't


It's a very compelling description of that moment when you're in pain over a one-sided breakup, and it all feels so visceral to you, and yet you know that they won't feel the loss that you do no matter how much you wish they would.
@UBotMate Some songs just profoundly capture life experiences. This is certainly one of them.
Notsimilarreally · 31-35, F
@UBotMate very much don't like that feeling 😞