Limerick Attempt

There once was a girl from similar world
She made men excited when she twirled
But it was a trick
Out came her dick
And all of the men hurled

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Harmonium1923 · 51-55, M

Allow me to assist with the meter:

A “girl” in this similar world
Turned on the dudes when she twirled
But when her next trick
Was showing her dick
They stopped beating off and just hurled.

Misanthropic · 26-30, M

@Harmonium1923 Good show

ProfessorPlum77 · 70-79, MVIP

A limerick that sums up "The Crying Game."

MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M

It's a difficult one since it's actually plural "similar worlds", so it doesnt really work

Misanthropic · 26-30, M

@MartinTheFirst I curse that one letter! 😆

MartinTheFirst · 26-30, M

@Misanthropic I tried rewriting it with "girls" but it changed the entire flow and mine was arguably not better

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