Linewriting punishment
edward has been naughty, so I have assigned some lines 馃槇
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46-50, F
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MissMeghan 路 46-50, F
In fact, I have been not too happy. Here is My feedback, which resulted in a rejection and re-assigment:
* your lines differ in length dramatically (compare the length of # 1 and #2). For a nice tidy look, you are to make sure your words form columns, i.e. every word being exactly below the same word in the other lines. Of course, you are not allowed to _write_ them in columns. you write them line by line.
* When underlining a word, e.g. my name, letters decending below the baseline should not be underlined, so that the line and the letter will not cross. In your sentences, the "g" in "Miss Meghan" should not have been underlined. Now look at "lazy". It does not look neat.
* Furthermore the line should keep a little distance (about half a millimetre) from the letters. Compare "careless" in # 24 (good) and
# 23 (not good).
馃槇
* your lines differ in length dramatically (compare the length of # 1 and #2). For a nice tidy look, you are to make sure your words form columns, i.e. every word being exactly below the same word in the other lines. Of course, you are not allowed to _write_ them in columns. you write them line by line.
* When underlining a word, e.g. my name, letters decending below the baseline should not be underlined, so that the line and the letter will not cross. In your sentences, the "g" in "Miss Meghan" should not have been underlined. Now look at "lazy". It does not look neat.
* Furthermore the line should keep a little distance (about half a millimetre) from the letters. Compare "careless" in # 24 (good) and
# 23 (not good).
馃槇
helenS 路 36-40, F
@MissMeghan He may have written the punishment lines too fast, trying to get it finished as soon as possible, indicating a lack of devotion.