Linewriting punishment

I believe you are quite happy with the result. It's neatly written, a ruler has been used to underline "lazy" and "careless" and [b][c=003BB2]neatly[/c] [/b] is neatly colorized.
I wonder if writing 40 lines will suffice as a punishment though.

In fact, I have been not too happy. Here is My feedback, which resulted in a rejection and re-assigment:

* your lines differ in length dramatically (compare the length of # 1 and #2). For a nice tidy look, you are to make sure your words form columns, i.e. every word being exactly below the same word in the other lines. Of course, you are not allowed to _write_ them in columns. you write them line by line.

* When underlining a word, e.g. my name, letters decending below the baseline should not be underlined, so that the line and the letter will not cross. In your sentences, the "g" in "Miss Meghan" should not have been underlined. Now look at "lazy". It does not look neat.

* Furthermore the line should keep a little distance (about half a millimetre) from the letters. Compare "careless" in # 24 (good) and
# 23 (not good).

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Very strict

Good handwriting though

that is nice miss

wow!!!