Can ya'll give me feedback on a short story i wrote ( I'm still working on it )

Icy cold fingers wrapped around my arm I screamed and squeezed my eyes shut.Then I heard a familiar voice… I opened my eyes in shock..I-It was Noah..! I say in a scared voice “I-I-I thought you were dead..I thought you were in a car accident and died!”. I start to cry.. Noah says in a soft voice “shhh its okay im here now” as he says while stroking the back of her head. He holds her tight.I look up at him, my eyes puffy from crying. But then I remembered… I saw him get buried 3 years ago. I saw his body in the casket. I back up slowly. Noah looks at me confused and says “what's wrong are you okay?” I scream “Get away you don't exist!” I get up and run as fast as I can. I can hear Noah chasing me and screaming “ Wait, come back let me explain!”. I see a house in the distance. I run into the house, lock the door and hide. Noah starts banging on the door and screaming “ I'm sorry please just let me explain” after a few minutes later the screaming stopped. I come out of where I was hiding and crawl to the window. All of a sudden a hand wraps around my mouth. I screamed but it was muffled. Then I hear Noah's voice again but this time…. He wasn't in his body..It was a tall black figure…