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DffrntDrmmr · M
I'll give critique I'm not qualified to give.
First off, the song is decent and the vocalist and the guitarist are good. I hear nice potential.
It's a home recording, so that it needs a bit more meat, density, to the song is not surprising.
I think the "know it all" part of the chorus' lyric isn't interesting enough, but is sung well.
Overall, the song is probably too generic, but fits the genre.
I'd suggest trying to flesh out more "personality" and emphasize it to try to make the song more catchy.
Overall, nothing really bad about it (which is good) but not enough special, either.
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First off, the song is decent and the vocalist and the guitarist are good. I hear nice potential.
It's a home recording, so that it needs a bit more meat, density, to the song is not surprising.
I think the "know it all" part of the chorus' lyric isn't interesting enough, but is sung well.
Overall, the song is probably too generic, but fits the genre.
I'd suggest trying to flesh out more "personality" and emphasize it to try to make the song more catchy.
Overall, nothing really bad about it (which is good) but not enough special, either.
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DffrntDrmmr · M
@Guitarman123 Hmmm. I'm surprised. Local studio, producer and engineer?
Guitarman123 · 31-35, M
@DffrntDrmmr yes. They release a single every several months
DffrntDrmmr · M
@Guitarman123 I wish them luck. I heard nothing bad or anything that I would think would be an obstacle to success. Just need some tweaking (based on this one song). Just my unprofessional opinion, of course.
DffrntDrmmr · M
I remember reading a member of a hugely successful band in that genre say something like, "You know how people say write a hook? Well, we write a hook in the chorus, a hook in the pre-chorus, a hook in the bridge and a hook in the verses." 😁