What do you think of this song I wrote? (Not me singing or drumming, I just wrote and played the music)

Honest, harsh opinions appreciated please[media=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ftw7y-1sU4Y]

Actually I rather liked it so no harsh opinions. I enjoy the offbeat non commercial efforts of artist. I helped make the "Association" famous so my critique isn't exactly worthless.

Jaydo1ph · 46-50, M

@Grateful4you awesome.. That must've been a blast. Thank you for the kind words.

Grateful4you · M

Most welcome. The music business is ruthless so develop a thick skin and persevere through the naysayers, (there will be many)

xixgun · M

The lyrics work, but who in the hell told that guy he could sing? Also, a 43 second intro is unnecessary (it's not Pink Floyd, after all).

Jaydo1ph · 46-50, M

@xixgun Totally man. Thank you. He is a brilliant lyricist.. Can't carry a tune in a bucket though. That's the big reason the band fell apart.

WineandCoffee · 51-55, F

I liked it .. but the singer needs more grrrrrr ya know

Jaydo1ph · 46-50, M

@WineandCoffee Absolutely! Thanks!

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