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This is what I wrote so far is it good

Finding my way home

A knock on the door , opens the front door, “I’m a lost young girl”, “I lost my parent, can you help find , them ?”


23 years later
She never found her parents , she forgot about them she ended up living with her new family but she wasn’t adopted legally but ended up living her new family she found, her father passed away , her founding father died, a year ago, and her founding mother, sewed clothes for a living in their public housing in Perth WA, she was 28 went to college to study accounting, she met a young man 3 years old than her, and they fell in love , her family figured out that the little girl comes from a very wealthy family and she will inherit billions so they find out her father had passed away but don’t tell her hopes to get to her money before she finds out.
IM5688 · 61-69, M
It's a workable story line that has great potential, but needs a lot of work. You need to fill in time periods and the rest of the who, what, when, where and why's.
MrsMONAKanful · 36-40, F
@IM5688 it’s a draft I woke up from my sleep with the idea
IM5688 · 61-69, M
@MrsMONAKanful Work on it. Build on it. Done correctly, it will make a great short story.

 
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