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Summer storm

Sultry summer night,
the growl of distant thunder pulsates
across space and time
like some primitive blood
pounding beast..
it carries through the open window
flirting with the curtains, sheer.
Creatures stir, night sounds waft in,
mingling with a hint of rain,
a scent of petrichor.
A flutter of leaves
and a shadow emerges from the dark,
undulating along an electric shaft.
Flash!
His form moves over me.
Warm, demanding hands, cascading over my contours,
a melting drench..
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PhilDeep · 51-55, M
I could say a lot about this; I'm fighting to keep phrases like enjambment out of the discussion but I can't help myself, Magenta. As usual, your contributions are just exquisite, in all their forms.
Magenta · F
@PhilDeep Lol. I don't always write perfectly phrased and grammatically correct poetry, etc.. It is about the realness of it, the expression of it, otherwise it would just feel generic and staged to me.

Thank you muchly. 🤗
PhilDeep · 51-55, M
@Magenta One of themost attractive features of poetry, I find, is exactly that: being playful with language, less constrained by rules, Magenta. Again, I am fighting the temptation to really look deeper into this using the usual literary and linguistic tools. It deserves it, in my opinion ❤️
Magenta · F
@PhilDeep Indeed!
Feel free. Would be interesting to read. 🩷