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Summer storm

Sultry summer night,
the growl of distant thunder pulsates
across space and time
like some primitive blood
pounding beast..
it carries through the open window
flirting with the curtains, sheer.
Creatures stir, night sounds waft in,
mingling with a hint of rain,
a scent of petrichor.
A flutter of leaves
and a shadow emerges from the dark,
undulating along an electric shaft.
Flash!
His form moves over me.
Warm, demanding hands, cascading over my contours,
a melting drench..
RuyLopez · 56-60, M Best Comment
Beautifully written.

- the ethereal fluid falling to the dry earth…the scent as the veins of the gods wet the garden within.
Magenta · F
@RuyLopez Thank you. 😘
Oh I like! Enriched nourishment.
RuyLopez · 56-60, M
@Magenta Yes. Overflowing. Filled with heat and energy.
Magenta · F
@RuyLopez Electrified moments.

SensualRomantic · 46-50, M
Passionate, sexy and sensual...

Loved it.. sigh...
Warm, demanding hands, cascading over my contours,
Magenta · F
@SensualRomantic Thank you ever so much. 😊
Wayne91 · 31-35, M
“Open window flirting with the curtains” 😈🔥😍
Very erotic, M. And sensual too. Well, well done. Leaving you starlight and moonbeams for your delight. ❤️
Magenta · F
@PoetryNEmotion A high compliment coming from you.✨💓
*gathers them up and saves them*
Harmonium1923 · 51-55, M
That’s very evocative. And provocative! One of your best.
Magenta · F
@Harmonium1923 Thank you! 🩷
Synyster · 51-55, M
This is quite sensual, I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Magenta · F
@Synyster My pleasure. Thank you for reading.
Synyster · 51-55, M
@Magenta You're welcome. 🤗
PhilDeep · 51-55, M
I could say a lot about this; I'm fighting to keep phrases like enjambment out of the discussion but I can't help myself, Magenta. As usual, your contributions are just exquisite, in all their forms.
Magenta · F
@PhilDeep Lol. I don't always write perfectly phrased and grammatically correct poetry, etc.. It is about the realness of it, the expression of it, otherwise it would just feel generic and staged to me.

Thank you muchly. 🤗
PhilDeep · 51-55, M
@Magenta One of themost attractive features of poetry, I find, is exactly that: being playful with language, less constrained by rules, Magenta. Again, I am fighting the temptation to really look deeper into this using the usual literary and linguistic tools. It deserves it, in my opinion ❤️
Magenta · F
@PhilDeep Indeed!
Feel free. Would be interesting to read. 🩷
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
This is amazing! Bravo!! Definitely a new favorite!!! 💜💜💜
Magenta · F
@CCMorgan Oh my, most appreciated!
Thrilled you enjoyed. 🩷
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
@Magenta I LOVED it! 😍 A pleasure to read, indeed! 💖
bookerdana · M
*fans self* 🥵

I really like the image,too
Magenta · F
@bookerdana Heh. 🍹
Magenta · F
@bookerdana And thank you b. I love it too.
bookerdana · M
@Magenta 🥵*fans faster* who knew rain through a window would be so SENSUOUS??
Patriot96 · 56-60, C
Love making love during thunderstorms. The approach of the storm is foreplay
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
Wow - evocative and erotic - 😋 mmmmm
Magenta · F
@SailingSlow Well thanks for reading and the appreciation.
SailingSlow · 61-69, M
@Magenta - your writing is beautiful, I loved it 🤗
Magenta · F
@SailingSlow Much appreciated. 😊
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Beautifully poetic and sensual - as always, I love it. :)
Magenta · F
@ChampagneOnIce Thank you. 💟
erosme · 46-50, M
Lovely dear lady!
Magenta · F
@erosme Thank you, Ruben. 🍓🍉
Magenta · F
😂 Wrong post. This was meant to go on your reply to my respite post.
Strictmichael75 · 61-69, M
So lovely and so “alive”
Magenta · F
@Strictmichael75 Alive. Yes!
Strictmichael75 · 61-69, M
@Magenta I hope to read more or even chat with you
Amor69Fati · 56-60, M
Erotic and sensual... Wow.. 👍🏼🙏🏼
Magenta · F
@Amor69Fati Thanks.
bhatjc · 46-50, M
That is a good summer storm.
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Coldplay · 61-69, M
Magenta · F
@Coldplay I concur. ;-)
Magenta · F
@Onestarlitnight Heat and moisture. ⚡

 
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