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Choose at least four of the words below:

Turn
World
Universe
Shout
Notice
Stop

She let go of his hand and turned to walk away. The water circling her ankles, splashing up her thighs, giving her goosebumps. She did not notice, she could not feel anything physical.

Her heart was breaking, the universe was shouting at her heart, screaming at her mind, telling her that she should stay with him. Make this work, let him hold you, give him another chance, repeated over and over, ad nauseum. She heard all of the protests, but it would not stop her. She had tried for so long, it was time to face the icy truth. Her heart had been broken, her mind had too many unanswered questions, and she would not pretend to be ok anymore.

It was then that she finally took notice of the ochre sun, rising over the soft ocean waves. Letting go hurt, but there was a new world ahead of her. One that might be terribly lonely, but one that would cause her less pain. She wrapped her arms around herself and gave herself a hug. This affection would have to give her the comfort she needed. This would have to suffice.


Degbeme · 70-79, M
The dad in me kicks in. You`re going to catch your death. Get out of the water. ;) :*
Degbeme · 70-79, M
@BexEyes If I get bored, I go find something to do. ;)
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Degbeme EXACTLY!!
Degbeme · 70-79, M
@BexEyes See! Too much coffee. You`re raising your voice to me. :P
This is a sweet sadness to this-and yet it offers a chance for a new beginning. The trick is divesting ourselves of past feelings and attachments. The ocean is good for that. This was bittersweet but adorable.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Thank you, my friend. @Elandra77
SW-User
This is so deeply relatable to me that I can't even find words. It's like you've been inside my head and pulled out the words I couldn't write. Wow... thank you. That's all I can say right now.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Oh my, just letting my brain vent. Thank you so much. @SW-User
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Beautiful. Sad but hopeful. Sometimes the best choices for us are the most difficult ones to make.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@ChampagneOnIce That is the truth and it sucks.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@BexEyes It really does. 💛
It's extremely difficult to let go, excellent writing!!
BexEyes · 46-50, F
I really appreciate the compliment. 🥰@sensualbeauty1
@BexEyes You're welcome..🤗
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
So beautiful, your stories... this one is very heartfelt. Great job! 🤗☮️
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@CCMorgan Thank you for taking the time to read them!
she would not pretend to be ok anymore. - beautiful
BexEyes · 46-50, F
It’s the truth, thank you for your kindness. @submissivelittlewoman
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
Her pain and emotions are so clear. But she sees the hope through those tears and keeps her sense of self. That is so important. And it is what makes this reflective and beautiful. Thank you for sharing my friend.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Sorrowfulgaze Thank you!!! Your comments are always uplifting.
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
She wasn't surprised when Johnny came busting through that door.
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
Thank you for not barricading the door with the wardrobe.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
All you had to do was knock, I’d have some tea and crumpets with you. @JohnnySpot
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
I'll intend on exercise all my appreciation of your bounty.
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
Beautiful post of strength and freedom. I love this and I think, one of your best. Thank you for sharing it with us.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Fungirlmmm Oh my, that is so sweet of you to say!!!
JohnnySpot · 56-60, M
You're rock candy baby!
MildlyInappropriate · 51-55, M
from my experience, some of the best hugs we receive are those we give ourselves - great read!
BexEyes · 46-50, F
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@MildlyInappropriate It has to be enough sometimes.
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
Girl I can relate to this so well, but I found such peace in walking away that I’ve never regretted the decision. Big hugs. 🤗
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@HeavenBesideYou Big hugs are the best, thank you!
Peaches · F
Well done, 💗 I think there's a piece of my heart in your story as well.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Peaches Ohhhh, I am sorry for that.
Peaches · F
@BexEyes It was a long time ago. 😔 It's true when it's said "what doesn't kill us can truly make us stronger!"🐥🍀
Noble · 56-60, M
SPECTACULAR SUBMISSION
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Noble Your exuberance made a huge smile appear on my face. Thank you!
Noble · 56-60, M
Awesome!

Mutually beneficial 🙏🏼 @BexEyes
New beginnings. Beautiful. 🖤
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Thank you. @JustGoneNow
@BexEyes Welcome. 🖤
Synyster · 51-55, M
Well done, I like it.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Synyster Thank you!!
Synyster · 51-55, M
@BexEyes You're welcome.
Rutterman · 46-50, M
You did a wonderful job. Very moving.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Thank you very much!@Rutterman
Newfound · 41-45, M
I enjoyed this. Thanks
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Thank you!@Newfound
Amazing...well done.
BexEyes · 46-50, F
Oh, thank you so very much!@FigNewton
Beautifully done
BexEyes · 46-50, F
@Stillwaiting Thank you, kind sir.

 
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