I finally finished the

@Lostpoet well… it’s just the beginning but I seriously shed off parts to make one of critics pacified. Now I have to do a couple of more edits, and move on to the younger critics. More edits,Then an illustrator. Then an actual child, then a read aloud to some children … and depending on that, more edits? Then some marketing then , then, and then and then we shall see. :-)

@Mindful You can maybe share it with some of us?

@Lostpoet In due time, I will be honored to. But it’s part of a series and I’m not sure when I will go public with it. When I do all of my critics will be listed as well. Since I believe that Iron sharpens iron I will be thanking them!