If I could i would leave

Dissolve into midnight no light rain
And just disappear without a trace
Let me leave no mistakes
and let a love word slip from my lips
and slow up my pace

If I could i would erase every step
Every finger print every fallen hair
and just disappear

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thewindupbirdchronicles · 46-50, M Best Comment

The first verse is 25 words, I counted in curiosity. I'll add some writing in too, just to give feelings,

To fall into that midnight rain,
without a step, as my feet awaken a puddle,
I made a mistake I would linger upon,
starved of love.

Lostpoet · M

@thewindupbirdchronicles It was just a short writing so i thought it fit into this category.

thewindupbirdchronicles · 46-50, M

@Lostpoet It did... and the categories are limited. But imagine a category for everything, I wrote a 24, 25, 26, 27....99....1001 word story in poem.... You got your feelings out with creativity. All good in the hood. 👀