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I Write

Their union was
Heaven and hell
Angel and demon
Peace and war
Tamed and primal

Their release, however,
Started as a ripple
And ended up like
The offspring of
An earthquake and a
Tsunami, leaving both
Utterly spent and
Gloriously sated.
diablesse · 56-60, F
and he's back with a bang.
Beautifully written my friend, it's good to be reading you again, and wow, you have outdone yourself with this one.
AlienZipper · 61-69, M
@diablesse Thank you. I just tried a minimal approach this time. Sometimes less is more.
diablesse · 56-60, F
It can be as is evident in your text.
AlienZipper · 61-69, M
@diablesse Write just enough to cause goose bumps.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
*fans self* Nicely done, sir. I love when you write.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@AlienZipper It is dark and mysterious and kind of creepy, at least to me, but I'm weird. Haha.
AlienZipper · 61-69, M
@ChampagneOnIce Well, I'll rethink it...
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@AlienZipper You don't have to do that. If you like it, that's what matters. :)
Did you read my private messages last week?? 😉

Lol...on a serious note, beautifully penned. 😊
AlienZipper · 61-69, M
@Vivaci Thank you 😉
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AlienZipper · 61-69, M
@SW-User I just thought I would catch some sun...
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AlienZipper · 61-69, M
@SW-User Wow... interesting lyrics...I'll give it a listen sometime...

 
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