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Love Divided (September 21)

This is for the September 21st writing prompt. I’m feeling the Halloween vibes…
https://similarworlds.com/literature/creative-writing/5385461-September-Writing-Prompts-For-the-writers-out-there

The Ghost in You

I miss the version of him who loved me -
not the man who walks around today
wearing his same face, his same hands,
but hollow where his tenderness used to live.

I miss how he used to look at me and really see me.
Now that gaze is gone, even though his eyes are the same.
It’s like losing your reflection in a mirror that still exists.

This is what love divided looks like -
split between who he was
and who he’s chosen to be,
leaving me to mourn a man who isn’t dead.

I’m haunted by the memory of someone
who became a stranger
when I wasn’t looking.
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StarLily · 51-55, F
Wanted to leave you a comment with quoting which line of your poem spoke to me the most... but I'd have to quote all of it.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@StarLily Thank you. It’s something I’ve seen and witnessed myself. It was milling around my mind, and I saw that writing prompt which helped me get it out.
StarLily · 51-55, F
@ChampagneOnIce Well, it's very good.

I looked at the writing prompts... I wish creative writing came a little more naturally to me. I love to write but I'm better at just sharing my thoughts about different things.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@StarLily There’s beauty in that, too. I write because it helps me share my thoughts and feelings creatively. Being able to be authentic and real in what you post is admirable. Good for you!
FrozenWasteland · 61-69, M
Powerful words. Beautiful, but so very sad. I'm sorry.

And I get it.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@FrozenWasteland Thank you for the compliment on my writing. It’s something I’d been thinking about, how we grow and change as does love, and sometimes, love moves on.
FrozenWasteland · 61-69, M
@ChampagneOnIce So true. But damn, that bit about looking in a familiar mirror and not seeing your reflection (ok. paraphrasing) -- that hits hard.

You are so welcome. I have always admired your writing. You have a lot of talent when it comes to this "feelings" stuff.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@FrozenWasteland Thank you. I like that line, too. It’s so true sometimes, and it’s sad when it happens.

I haven’t really fallen into my feelings lately. That’s probably why I haven’t felt inspired to write, but I’m going there again, and I’m grateful when inspiration hits. :)
Magenta · F
Oh, this is really good! A little sad too. 💕
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@Magenta Thank you. Something I had been thinking about, and the writing prompt helped.
Magenta · F
@ChampagneOnIce I'm glad it helped it to come together for you. Sometimes we just need to "get it out of us".
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@Magenta Yes, definitely. A friend is going through a divorce, and I find it sad when we fall out of love with someone. We grow and change, and sometimes, that moves us apart instead of closer together.
being · 36-40, F
Is this your writing? It's so good
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@being Yes. I used to write quite a bit, but my creativity went dormant for a while. I’ve been trying to write more again. Sometimes inspiration flows, and the writing prompts help.

 
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