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Love Divided (September 21)

This is for the September 21st writing prompt. I’m feeling the Halloween vibes…
https://similarworlds.com/literature/creative-writing/5385461-September-Writing-Prompts-For-the-writers-out-there

The Ghost in You

I miss the version of him who loved me -
not the man who walks around today
wearing his same face, his same hands,
but hollow where his tenderness used to live.

I miss how he used to look at me and really see me.
Now that gaze is gone, even though his eyes are the same.
It’s like losing your reflection in a mirror that still exists.

This is what love divided looks like -
split between who he was
and who he’s chosen to be,
leaving me to mourn a man who isn’t dead.

I’m haunted by the memory of someone
who became a stranger
when I wasn’t looking.
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StarLily · 51-55, F
Wanted to leave you a comment with quoting which line of your poem spoke to me the most... but I'd have to quote all of it.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@StarLily Thank you. It’s something I’ve seen and witnessed myself. It was milling around my mind, and I saw that writing prompt which helped me get it out.
StarLily · 51-55, F
@ChampagneOnIce Well, it's very good.

I looked at the writing prompts... I wish creative writing came a little more naturally to me. I love to write but I'm better at just sharing my thoughts about different things.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@StarLily There’s beauty in that, too. I write because it helps me share my thoughts and feelings creatively. Being able to be authentic and real in what you post is admirable. Good for you!