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Love Divided (September 21)

This is for the September 21st writing prompt. I’m feeling the Halloween vibes…
https://similarworlds.com/literature/creative-writing/5385461-September-Writing-Prompts-For-the-writers-out-there

The Ghost in You

I miss the version of him who loved me -
not the man who walks around today
wearing his same face, his same hands,
but hollow where his tenderness used to live.

I miss how he used to look at me and really see me.
Now that gaze is gone, even though his eyes are the same.
It’s like losing your reflection in a mirror that still exists.

This is what love divided looks like -
split between who he was
and who he’s chosen to be,
leaving me to mourn a man who isn’t dead.

I’m haunted by the memory of someone
who became a stranger
when I wasn’t looking.
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FrozenWasteland · 61-69, M
Powerful words. Beautiful, but so very sad. I'm sorry.

And I get it.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@FrozenWasteland Thank you for the compliment on my writing. It’s something I’d been thinking about, how we grow and change as does love, and sometimes, love moves on.
FrozenWasteland · 61-69, M
@ChampagneOnIce So true. But damn, that bit about looking in a familiar mirror and not seeing your reflection (ok. paraphrasing) -- that hits hard.

You are so welcome. I have always admired your writing. You have a lot of talent when it comes to this "feelings" stuff.
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
@FrozenWasteland Thank you. I like that line, too. It’s so true sometimes, and it’s sad when it happens.

I haven’t really fallen into my feelings lately. That’s probably why I haven’t felt inspired to write, but I’m going there again, and I’m grateful when inspiration hits. :)