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My First Haibun.

My first haibun :)

She bends on her knees to kiss you on the cheek, sets your hair right, takes your hand and transfers it gently into someone else's, who will take it from there.

music class...
tracing dotted curves
until I see her face again.
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I like this. At first, I thought I read “hair bun”. Because I had not heard “haibun” as a poem. Mad googling then. I should have heard of it, since the first reported usage was in the 17th century.

Then I really liked it!
nobodyishome · 31-35, F
@Mamapolo2016 Thanks!
nobodyishome · 31-35, F
@Mamapolo2016 It was also a part of a book that we published together at write club back home in Hyderabad, India. An Anthology.
IamBack · 31-35, M
Hmm is that meant to be erotic in a way?
IamBack · 31-35, M
@nobodyishome you need to learn how to laugh a lil bit 🤷🏻‍♂
nobodyishome · 31-35, F
@IamBack And you need to go back home.
nobodyishome · 31-35, F
Or be back in Paradise.

 
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