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Darkness falls....

@ChampagneOnIce

Thank you for creating another opportunity to write after a long long time.... sorry for the bitterness of it..

https://similarworlds.com/literature/4418454-August-Writing-Prompts-For-those-whod-like-some


Death, what a horrofying wish....
Life, what a fearful hope....

Darkness falls and it's fear that knocks on my door...

Darkness falls and it's silence that seals my lips ....

With its thorns, it's the falling darkness that stiches my soul to the deep emptiness of being .....

And I ..... still ..... dream of hope ....


🤗🤗🌹
Magenta · F
I really enjoyed this! The depth of feeling especially and how you use words, meaningfully. 🥰
@Magenta

Thank you sweet Magenta.... hearing this from you means a lot..... 🤗🤗🌹💕
Magenta · F
@Soossie Aaw, thank you for sharing it. 🤗
@Magenta

Thank you for reading dear lady...
ChampagneOnIce · 51-55, F
Wow. Wonderful writing. I love how you expressed this, and I agree with @Magenta on the depth of feeling in your words. Thank you for writing and sharing. There is always hope. 💞
@ChampagneOnIce

Thank you sweet lady.... it felt good to write after a while.. 🌹🌹🤗💕
TexChik · F
I hope it’s a comfort to know we all feel that way about our ultimate demise . Perhaps the most severe initiation imaginable, to be able to enter Heaven !
Beautiful writing my dear sweet friend. Hugs!
@TexChik

Thank you lovely .... Im so very glad that you liked his... 🤗🤗🌹💕😘
Coletracer · M
hope is amazing... always
@Coletracer

It is indeed dear Tracer.... 🤗🤗😘
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
Brilliantly written! You capture the humanity, at a trying time… and with hope the message is positive and not bitter. Thank you for sharing ☮️
@CCMorgan

Thank you so much for your very kind words....

🤗🙏
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
I hang out in the darkness a good bit these days. You describe it perfectly in this poem.

And still… dream of hope.

Someday.
@HeavenBesideYou

Sweet Heaven!! Im so sorry to hear this... light will always find a crack to get in....

Love you my friend... 🤗🤗💕
Sorry to have missed this one. It's beautifully expressed. Without hope, we have nothing....🤗🌷✨
@MoonlightLullaby

Very true.... hope is all we have.... hope if faith and without it (as you said) we have nothing....

Thank you for reading this... 🤗🤗🌹
@Soossie It was my pleasure to read and it's so good to see you writing again, especially when it's coming from the depths of your heart.♥️💫
SweetMae · 70-79, F
Nice writting. Especially the last line.
SweetMae · 70-79, F
@Soossie Hello Sis ... 🌹💕🌹
@SweetMae

Have a wonderful Wednesday my sweet sister...
SweetMae · 70-79, F
@Soossie Thank you. 😊 Have a great Thursday. 💕
Rutterman · 46-50, M
Very evocative and powerful. Well done, my friend.
@Rutterman

Hi dear Rutterman..... and thank you... 🤗🤗
Rutterman · 46-50, M
@Soossie You're welcome, and thank you for sharing. 🤗
pearllederman · 61-69, F
thats a good poem
@pearllederman

Thank you sweet lady.... 🌹🌹💕😘🤗
Beautiful, Soossie. 🤗
@bijouxbroussard

Thank you my beautiful sister... 🤗🤗🌹💕

 
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