I never meant to

I never meant to hurt you
I never meant to disappear on you
I never meant to tell you
things i shouldn't have

I've come back from the grave to tell you this
I've come back from the grave to see you again
Even if you can't see me

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Melissa501 · 36-40, F Best Comment

I cant even begin to tell you how much it hurts when you disappear on me. And i see you everywhere. In my daydreams. In my night dreams. It is always you. And it always will be. ♥️

bookerdana · M

This is good....concise and powerful 🙂

only very small quibble><: things i shouldn't have...idk,I Can't think of a replacement idea

Lostpoet · M

@bookerdana yeah I was going for something but the idea just fizzled out. I post a lot of these just to have the words and ideas written down somewhere and maybe later on they'll fit into a poem or other small writings.

Did you ever see the movie Ghost?

bookerdana · M

@Lostpoet Yes,also Ghost Story (2017) and Ghost World..I get Ghosted a lot!😀

Thats a good idea,novelists used to workout their ideas in short stories. My comment was a quibble..you got it!💪

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