How do I make the statement below grammatically correct or is it just fine the way it is?

"How do I make sure there will be no problems with all my credits being accounted for for when I graduate?"

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BigBulge · 41-45, M Best Comment

Start by deleting a "for." I'd place a comma after the remaining "for."

MightyLion · 18-21, M

Nice attention to detail with the recommendation to add a comma. @BigBulge

JustNik · 51-55, F

To me, you don’t need the second “for” in there.

MightyLion · 18-21, M

okay, thank you.@JustNik

SW-User

Or you could write

[quote]How do I make sure that all my credits are accounted for when I graduate?[/quote]

Fertilization · 36-40, F

Second for is not needed.

DeWayfarer · 61-69, M

Third time agreed. No second "for".

DeWayfarer · 61-69, M

Also style, which is not grammar, could be improved...

When I graduate, how do I make sure there will be no problems with all my credits being accounted?

"For" unnecessary.

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