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When you died, I died too

after a brief flurry
of activity
the front door shut
the blinds were drawn
the dust motes settled
the sounds ceased
your bed lies empty
the bathroom mirror
misses your fine face
your clothes hang abandoned
your shoes miss your feet
the footsteps
of your belov-ed
have echoed
for the last time
the appraisers
have come and gone
the for sale sign
soon planted
upon the front yard
I am your old home
when you died
I died too


* I feel such a connection to this old estate. Now I feel its sadness. The only people who come into it now are all about business and money. She is sad and wonders on her fate. I wish a family to buy her and to love her again. Footsteps inside. Laughter. Joy. More likely a developer will buy her and all her land. I admire the majestic old trees. The deer who daintily walk the grounds. The bunnies that I can talk to from 5 feet away. The chipmunks that the Lady of the Estate fed from her hands. The squirrels. The darting, musical birds. I walk the grounds as she did. And I wonder what will happen now to this beauty. Please let her fate be a good one!*
Eddiesolds · 61-69, M
I miss my house in,willow park. I look at it everyday on the way home.its still beautiful. The inside was really beautiful..
And yes , i did all of that. Lol
@Eddiesolds Then your home misses you too. What do you do about this missing now?
Eddiesolds · 61-69, M
@PoetryNEmotion Nothing at all. I miss my garage the most
This is so beautifully written and so full of love and emotion.
@robingoodfellow Thank you from my heart! She is a grand old home.
Hmm that’s a good way to put it.

So many places you could take this interpretation. I can hear the old house weep for the little feet that once played and ran down halls
@PoetryNEmotion but what then shall I do to whittle away the hours of the day?🙃
@Quoththeraven I have some excellent ideas....There are many bedrooms.
@Quoththeraven And the wildlife likes to be fed! Those chipmunks. The deer. The rest....
Magenta · F
Wow, so touching, my darling wordsmith . 🥰😌
@Magenta Hi, darling M. Thank you from my heart. I was just wondering whether I should continue posting poetry here. This site is becoming like McDonald's-fast, cheap, and easy. I swear if I see one more "girl" posting her genitals for attention....It is a shame and sad too. I trust you are well and enjoying this summer? Love to you too. :)
Magenta · F
@PoetryNEmotion Hi!
I was just wondering whether I should continue posting poetry here. This site is becoming like McDonald's-fast, cheap, and easy.
Haha. Ditto. I rarely post out here now. I do miss writing and creating though. You ad a lot to the atmosphere.

I am. Busy, and of course riding every chance I get! I hope you are as well. 💖
@Magenta My friends keep me here. If not for my inner circle, I would be long gone. You must write and create, M! It is part of you! I am honoured. You add so much to the atmosphere too! Excellent! I am busy working out of town. Thank you. *places kisses in your pockets to take with you wherever you roam* Until soon, M! Take care.
silentwriter180 · 51-55, F
Reminded me of leaving my home in Waikapu. Similar feelings.

 
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