What in the world is "one and a half page long" intro? Like what kind of standard is that?
Wrote a proposal for a research paper. Apparently my introduction was "too long" (a thousand words". I was instructed to cut down on some of it to "make it shorter". So I did. Got it reviewed. Now it needs to be "even shorter". I'm like WTF? This info is important I can't cut it shorter I need this to introduce the audience to the topic without deficit of facts. But I was instructed that the rule is that your intro has to be "one and a half page long". Yeah. That's the "scientific method" for y'all. Piece of crap. Where is this written? Show me! "oh it's just that I've worked for them for so long that I know what they accept and what they reject". Ugh. Okay.