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Where the hell do you think the valley of the shadow lies?

Wandering through the palace amidst soldiers row on row.

The calm and erry silence and that scent that is so familiar to those who wander in old places so old that they have lost their fear.

I should have been frightened but a strange calm familiarity over came my senses and I began to fill with a deep loneliness that filled my eyes with tears.

I looked through the stained glass windows and the soldiers row upon tow… departed spirits and their armour remains left in the castle here on earth underneath the spring clouds of heaven and the luminescent glow of afternoon twilight that lit those gloomy empty halls.


I wondered where she was and if the sun shone now in the Greek islands and if they warmed them more. Impossible to imagine a place of warmth under that same sun as the trembling of the chill I had caught rippled through me in that gloomy corridor.

I wondered if it was too early to seek out that same sun and leave this place of grey shadows and cold dark sun.

Somewhere in that palace of ghosts and empty shells and gloomy dark sunlight that filled the rooms I found my way to the end out into the sun. The world had stood still in those moments but now life had returned like a rushing raging river of life of sounds and lights and smells.


In those moments in the corridors when I was lost and found I finally grasped my courage and tearfully braved on.
Freeranger · M
Many years later, Civil War General Joshua Chamberlain would go back to Gettysburg and sit on the promontory of Little Round Top where he has made his stand.
While still living in what was at that time his present day, he wrote in his memoirs that he could sit upon the crest and feel old souls gather around him, as if they had risen up. "In great deeds something abides. On great fields something stays. Forms change and pass; bodies disappear; but spirits linger, to consecrate ground for the vision-place of souls."

While it appears that, after the facts, the two authors had slightly different endings, the spirit of the their moments were very similar shared experiences. Interesting piece.
Thanks for posting it among a morass of poor-me threads.
akindheart · 61-69, F
@Freeranger beautiful story.
Rilyn · 31-35, F
Once I had a dream. This dream showed the darkest of valleys. Scorched by the sun, mist everywhere, deep purple skies, graveyards, visions....I was convinced that was what hell was like and where I was trapped for some time.
Northwest · M
Possibly on one of those long hikes I used to take deep in British Columbia? Lots of valleys, so thick with massive trees, the sun never makes it through.
I like it. What's ANR?
Muthafukajones · 46-50, M
@Muthafukajones okay so I see you edited out the ANR from your post so nevermind then
@Muthafukajones it's a good story thanks for sharing

 
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