Protector de Lina Inverse.
About Me The Whiteboard is a place where people can send Gestures, Attributes, Images, Comments, and much more...
This page is a permanent link to the comment below. See all comments »
SW-User
( No hay de que. Seguiré haciéndolo, ya mismo. Y qué tal "He was a little bit surprised when he saw..." Suena mucho mejor, no cree? Otra cosa, evite cambios de tiempo verbal, sí empezó con el verbo to be en el pasado, más correcto será "He was a little bit surprised when he saw that the floor was already dry, and listening that she was..." Mantenga el tiempo. Lamento sí soy una profesora exigente. xDDD Una otra corrección... "meanwhie he watches" a la vez de see. Y las comas, como yo usted exagera en ellas. Hmm terminando, sería looks y no look. Omg, qué testamento, no me mate (?) )
~ Lasagna? I guess I have everything.. After all, it's my favorite. Go on, take a look and make yourself at home.
So she said, after all, she got excited with the idea of eating lasagna. Since she knew better where she had the ingredients she took out some of them to leave them on the table, even the meat.
~ Is there anything you need more tan these?
She asked, looking at all the stuff that occupied half of the table. There were onions, some herbs, tomatos, the pasta and all the other things she knew they would need.
~ Lasagna? I guess I have everything.. After all, it's my favorite. Go on, take a look and make yourself at home.
So she said, after all, she got excited with the idea of eating lasagna. Since she knew better where she had the ingredients she took out some of them to leave them on the table, even the meat.
~ Is there anything you need more tan these?
She asked, looking at all the stuff that occupied half of the table. There were onions, some herbs, tomatos, the pasta and all the other things she knew they would need.