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I Don't Think She Knows How Truly Beautiful She Is

Perfection of the Heart
by: Rob Paquin

To turn yourself into a work of art
Upon the whole, and not in part
Quite a perfect place to start
Is with the perfecting of your heart

There is a lady that I know
Thoughts and feelings overflow
And as she passes, I see her glow
And I feel the gifts that she bestows

Beauty shining like the stars
Picture perfect like the great Renoir's
And though her soul has some scars
She's worth the worshiping from afar

Eyes of green, and hair like fire
A smile that incites desire
Words that lift and take me higher
A subtle touch that I admire

Soft and sweet are her affections
As she wanders in her own direction
Adding experiences to her collection
As she searches for her heart's perfection

© ~The Snowdog
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Loretta78 · 46-50, F
Awww!! 🤗
HikingMan · 51-55, M
Hahaha. I write. It's what I do.I take it to various levels. Though this is a tribute of sorts, it shouldn't be construed as an enamored advance. She's been quite kind to my rhymes at times, and she's fairly fetching. This is a thank you for the many likes over the year she's bestowed to my paltry publications.....

Glad you enjoyed reading it
Loretta78 · 46-50, F
@HikingMan: Well! Writing is my hobby! And although English is not my home language I am able to recognize a well written text/poem IMMEDIATELY! 😌☺