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"The Fountain"


One time, I was at a big party, and there were a lot of my friends there. I was feeling smothered
because everybody seemed to want a piece of me. I felt like a rock star at a concert, drowning in the 'mosh pit'. God, I wanted to scream!
Then from all the way across the room- I saw her. Have you ever met someone for the very first time,
and "Wham! Bang!" It's like magic, I was immediately drawn to her. The crowd of people just separated as
I made my way to her, and she just opened up and took me into her arms. When our eyes locked onto each other,
it was like we were the only two people in the room. I knew then, that I could never be very far away from her again.
One day, I was very moody; feeling like shit, and making all those around me feel like shit. I was being a real asshole;
complaining about everything, complaining about nothing, and she just listened, not saying a word. Then, I noticed that
she had a teardrop rolling down her cheek.
I asked her, "What? Was it something I said, something I did?"
"No," she shook her head. "It's just that I had a daughter once," she explained. "And then she got sick, and I lost her."
Her tears flowed freely now, as she told me more. "God, she was so beautiful, so full of life and passion. And even towards the end,
when she found out she didn't have much time left," she paused, wiping her tears. "She never complained about anything... except just one time."
We were driving in her jeep now, as she continued her story. I listened carefully, as we drove on some winding mountain road,
leading us to God know's where...
"One time, I took her to this park; a very beautiful, magical park. There was this drinking fountain there; and she just wanted to get a drink,
to taste of the cold, mountain waters. But; it was too big for her to drink all by herself, I had to lift her up to get a drink.
'Why don't they make em' to fit me' she complained. 'It's not fair!"
She was silent for a moment, as she navigated the twists and turns of the road. "Not long after, she was gone," she finished.
Now, I was the one fighting back tears. I felt like someone had hit me in the face with a brick! I had no fucking idea. I felt so small, so unimportant.
Then, we came to a stop, and I was dumbstruck when I realized where we were. It had started to snow lightly then, and we were at this beautiful,
magical park. Her Park. I looked around; then, I saw it! I jumped out of the jeep, and with tears streaming down my face, I said to her,
"My God! You built a little fountain for her, didn't you?
I almost fell on my ass, as I ran, trying to get to it. It was so beautiful, so special, so magical. A little silver drinking fountain with a silver
chain-link fence all around it. I opened the tiny gate, and just above the third little step; across the front of it, was an inscription that read-
"FOR HER... AND ALL THE OTHER'S WHO WERE TOO SMALL TO DRINK"
My God! I knew at that moment, right then, right there, that I would never, ever, bitch or complain about my small, petty problems to anyone else again.
cKs.

Authors note: Proper recognition given to Joe Walsh, who told this story to Stevie Nicks, who then told it to me. And to my dear friend,
Lorian Hemingway, who made things come full-circle.
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-Kelly.
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LittlePurple · 31-35, F
There are some who complain about small matters and dont see other hard things other people go through everyday . Thank you for sharing it here
Montanaman · M
@LittlePurple omg, thank you for reading me and kind and caring comment.👍🤗💕
LittlePurple · 31-35, F
@Montanaman you are welcome 🤗🌹🌸
This is touching especially because it is based upon the truth. I like it. Thanks for sharing.
Montanaman · M
@PoetryNEmotion my pleasure. Thank you so very much for reading and comments. 💓
@Montanaman You are most welcome. I write mostly erotic poetry here. A few stories unlike yours. I write about nature too. Perhaps you would like to taste some of my creations? Feel free to comment as well. Many people who don't like poetry tend to like mine. I think you would especially like my featured angel poetry.
Montanaman · M
@PoetryNEmotion I'll definitely have to check it. 🤗
AngelKrish · 26-30, M
I will never complain or get mad at anyone who loves me 🥺😢 because i don't wanna loose anymore, because now only one is left ..... ! Thanks for sharing with me❤️
Montanaman · M
@AngelKrish pleasure 🤗
Mocha24 · 31-35, F
Awww !! This is such a sad ..but kind story ...great ending ... I love when we gave those small epiphanies that makes us better than before
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Montanaman · M
@missbeez That's how I came to meet her, invited backstage and private party. She is Amazing 😍
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Montanaman · M
@missbeez that's quite special. I lost mine in one of many moves one year, one time.🤗
Francesca97 · 26-30, F
You know Stevie Nicks, from Fleetwood Mac? My Dad will be amazed!
Montanaman · M
@Francesca97 Yes, and I was Amazed 🤪😎🥰
NewRaven · 51-55, F
Beautiful story!
Montanaman · M
@NewRaven Thank you 😊 and i appreciate your time in reading 🤗🌹
NewRaven · 51-55, F
@Montanaman I like to read, so my pleasure. So cool you heard it from Stevie Nick’s too
Montanaman · M
@NewRaven Yes. Amazing opportunity Backstage. 🤗😎
Peaceful · F
Thank you for this beauty. 🥺
Montanaman · M
@Peaceful thank you for reading and allowing me to touch you. 😔🤗
Quimliqer · 70-79, M
An eye opening story!!
Montanaman · M
@Quimliqer thank you 👍🤗
JoJo19 · 26-30, F
That's so beautiful!
Montanaman · M
@JoJo19 Thank you very much 🤗
JohnOinger · 41-45, M
Montanaman · M
@JohnOinger 👍👍🤗😎 thanks man.👊
JohnOinger · 41-45, M
@Montanaman Your Welcome🙂
ExtremeNext · 36-40
That made me cry 😭
Montanaman · M
@ExtremeNext 😢🤗💞
Every so often, I get a read, that literally fucks me up. And when that happens, I'm like, Damn.
And it's absolutely, the Best compliment a writer can receive.😔🤗🤭💞
Thank you for being that one. 🥰😘
Bc8627 · 26-30, F
Montanaman · M
@Bc8627 🤪☺️🤗
xcelyg · 22-25, F
heartfelt ❤️
Kstrong · 56-60, F
Thankz for that touching story, never take anything for granted, all of life is a gift
Montanaman · M
@Kstrong So true. And you're welcome 😊 Thank you for reading me.🤗🤗❤️
Kstrong · 56-60, F
@Montanaman youre an excellent writer.... creating beautiful word pictures
Montanaman · M
@Kstrong ☺️🤭🤗❤️✍️🤗❤️🌹
Tugged at my heart. ❤️
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Montanaman · M
@CookieCrumbs It's my pleasure. 🤗❤️And thank you for taking the time to read me.🤗❤️
@Montanaman
I always do. You know that.

You have the gift of putting feelings into words that makes us "feel" them even more.
Montanaman · M
@CookieCrumbs BigSmiles ☺️😃And BigHugs 🤗🤗🤗
TheIncredibleHulka · 31-35, F
This is so beautiful, it touched me right here. ❤️
Montanaman · M
@TheIncredibleHulka That's what I wanted to happen 💓💓
SW-User
Such a sad story, but really does get one to thinking about complaining to much and not appreciating life.
WillaKissing · 56-60, M
Beautiful and thank you for sharing this.
Montanaman · M
@WillaKissing Hugs 🤗🤗🤗
AlittleBitGenX · 46-50, F
Montanaman · M
@AlittleBitGenX Smiles 😃 😊 Goodnight 🤗😇😴
AmoreSong · F
𝐉𝐮𝐬𝐭...𝐓𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐤 𝐘𝐨𝐮!!!🥺❤️
Bushmanoz · 61-69, M
Bastard..(not in a bad way)..just squeezed the old heart, you are a good bloke
ExtremeNext · 36-40
@Bushmanoz are you sure you are not gay?
Montanaman · M
@Bushmanoz thank you mate. ☺️🤗😎
Bushmanoz · 61-69, M
@ExtremeNext lol..if I was I wouldn't be bidding on all these old Buffy and Angel action figures for sale on ebay

 
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