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Someone posted a few days back "Winter Wonderland". I guess as they were happy for all the snow they got. They asked us to comment and BE DESCRIPTIVE-! So I was.

A Matter of Perspective[b][u][/u][/b]






Her young bones shivered in the unrelenting cold. The snow of the past few days cut through her threadbare clothing making her wet and cold;she longed for a warm fireplace or pit of which one was not to be had.

The tattered rags she wore barely covered her young , lithe frame and try as she might, she tried to smile through the tears;a vain attempt. Any semblance of what they once were or even the design the manufacturer had intended were long gone. She was a beggar, a waif, a scion of society and, at 6, she doubted she see woudl see her 10th birthday. London, HER London, that is the London of 1806 could be cruel to those with out any means for support.

But none of that mattered now. Now she just wished she had someplace to go and where she would be wanted cared for, attended to and educated as a proper girl should be. Somewhere far from the hell her young years had seen so far. She longed to be held in the arms of another and to have a long cry in the shoulders of one who cared. Someplace far form the horrors of winter and the cursed snow it brought.

She forced a smile and wiped her nose with her elbow, sneezing as the blustery winds cut through her and the snow continued to fall. For this was the age of cholera and the yearly epidemic. She wondered , unseen, as if a spirit, through the cobblestone streets of London looking, hoping-and praying for one that may show her a bit of daily compassion. A few morsels of food, here or there, were all she got;leftovers from ones that saw, but pretended NOT to see her. For three years, since the untimely death of her last known relatives she had been a vagabond to the streets.

The medical attention she needed would never come as sometime after the visit of Father Christmas but before the beginning of the new year she would be found dead in a lonely alleyway off the Thames.

Her frozen, stiff body (still with a faint smile) almost completely buried in snow.

fin

A wonderland to some may be hell on Earth for others. It's all a matter of perspective.
SW-User
I do not like snow.. 馃敧鉀勶笍. lol
However, I loved this story.. wow!
SW-User
Frozen pipes, Can鈥檛 get to work, Kids out of school.. lol
@SW-User The kids and school are no longer an issue. And the pipes have froze so many times they are immune to it by now. Then there is the shoveling- and the tossing of shale and such in my front yard- more damn work for Spring. And the aching bones -and back.
SW-User
Death to snow! lol
Skylarkascending56-60, M
Echoes of The Little Match Girl and Charles Dickens. You write well.
@Skylarkascending Thank You . It was meant to be that -but not meant to copy The Little Match Girl. It was meant to show that one person "wonderland's" is another's hell on Earth.

I believe it is too morose for most.
Skylarkascending56-60, M
Not to copy. But it has echoes. It is a lovely piece.
@Skylarkascending Thank You , I had thought the same after it was written.

It was taken form a longer story I wrote and there was some background regarding the orphaned little girl. (Her name was Anne, a compromise between her English Father and French Mother)
I鈥檓 careful not to let my nightmare taint other people鈥檚 wonderland. 馃枻

@DarkHeaven That is very compassionate and thoughtful of you. I feel the same way. There is a certain of gaiety to the season that some need to enjoy.
@Elandra77 When it becomes to much, I shut myself off. It鈥檚 not fair for me to ruin their holiday. 馃枻

 
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