I Enjoy Writing and Sharing Poetry With Others
With a little thanks from a friend with this one.
I wouldn’t have got that last verse satisfactory without you @chagrined
Falling
Falling floating into or under
Fall gently inside me my heart all asunder
And tell me of falling
As you hold me and wonder
Of falling up and outside of in
Falling too fast so you lose as you win
What is forgotten?
When falling begins
When you fall into me
And at my feat
And I fall over you
And admit defeat
Did you fall?
Were you pushed?
Did you jump?
Far enough?
Finally falling fleeting forever
Fall fast and fall full and fall far from the never
Fall into my fairytale and whisper my pleasure
Until falling becomes our endless endeavour
And I get to post the haim song again yay!
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=AIjVpRAXK18]
I wouldn’t have got that last verse satisfactory without you @chagrined
Falling
Falling floating into or under
Fall gently inside me my heart all asunder
And tell me of falling
As you hold me and wonder
Of falling up and outside of in
Falling too fast so you lose as you win
What is forgotten?
When falling begins
When you fall into me
And at my feat
And I fall over you
And admit defeat
Did you fall?
Were you pushed?
Did you jump?
Far enough?
Finally falling fleeting forever
Fall fast and fall full and fall far from the never
Fall into my fairytale and whisper my pleasure
Until falling becomes our endless endeavour
And I get to post the haim song again yay!
[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=AIjVpRAXK18]
