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I Enjoy Writing and Sharing Poetry With Others

With a little thanks from a friend with this one.

I wouldn’t have got that last verse satisfactory without you @chagrined


Falling

Falling floating into or under
Fall gently inside me my heart all asunder
And tell me of falling
As you hold me and wonder

Of falling up and outside of in
Falling too fast so you lose as you win
What is forgotten?
When falling begins

When you fall into me
And at my feat
And I fall over you
And admit defeat

Did you fall?
Were you pushed?
Did you jump?
Far enough?

Finally falling fleeting forever
Fall fast and fall full and fall far from the never
Fall into my fairytale and whisper my pleasure
Until falling becomes our endless endeavour

And I get to post the haim song again yay!


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Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
Falling and floating all the same feeling in the end.

This cries out to be a song.
MayaHope · 41-45, F
Yes really I would like to record how it sounds to be spoken... not sure about the singing though...@Sorrowfulgaze
Sorrowfulgaze · 46-50, M
@MayaHope If Tom Waits can. You can.
SW-User
Awwwwww...I didn't do much of anything. It was brilliant already!
MayaHope · 41-45, F
Well I admit I did do most of the work lol @SW-User
Elegy · 46-50
I [i]do [/i]like that ending.
MayaHope · 41-45, F
Thanks htda get you reading my posts all of a sudden! What an endeavour!@Elegy

 
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