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For the 4/25 Challenge, here is what could be a song.

Tears are falling

Rain, gently falling down
A moment forever captured
Sadness mingles throughout
A face needing reassured

A look that longs to reveal
The pain felt within the heart
An ache felt deep inside
Longing to peel apart

Tears are falling, cascading down
Rain has washed them to the ground

Waiting to see him arrive
To feel the touch of his skin
To look into his mystic eyes
And feel his warmth within

Tears are falling, cascading down
Rain has washed them to the ground
Nicely done. I can hear this in a minor key. Say Am or Em. These are sweet sentiments.
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@Elandra77 Definitely a minor key. She hopes to feel better but the rain washing over her drowns that out
Fungirlmmm · 51-55, F
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing with us once again.
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@Fungirlmmm Any time fungirlmmm. You know I enjoy sharing.😊
CCMorgan · 51-55, M
Nice work! Thank you for sharing 👍️☮️
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@CCMorgan Thank you so much CCMorgan.☺
HeavenBesideYou · 56-60, F
That is excellent!
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@HeavenBesideYou Thank you. I just heard a song while reading the words to use.
Peaches · F
So bittersweet. 😌💕💙
ReneeT · 61-69, M
@Peaches Thank you so much Peaches. Sometimes the best laid plans seem to fall by the wayside 😟

 
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