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Can someone give me some advice?

I’m writing a story with two characters but one of them is a spirit and can only interact with the other. No other characters can see or heart the spirit. I’m trying to make the spirit less flat and just revolving around the viewpoint character. Any advice would be appreciated. Thanks.
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I don’t have any experience writing novels (besides some crappy ones when I was 12) but I am told I have a natural skill for writing.

I’m trying to make the spirit less flat and just revolving around the viewpoint character.
Can you explain exactly what you mean?